Thursday, November 1, 2012

Drops

soft drops slide down branches 
leaves spread out like stars
sun peeks in
settles nicely on doorsteps 
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5 comments:

  1. SBStokes-poetNovember 1, 2012 at 2:18 PM

    Very nice. Almost haiku-like.

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  2. JulesNovember 3, 2012 at 11:06 AM

    ...unlike the brick-drops of a hurricane...

    Cheers.

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    1. bluberriesonmarsNovember 4, 2012 at 12:06 AM

      Thanks Jules for commenting. I know the hurricane dropped more than bricks this time.

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  3. Clare WilsonNovember 5, 2012 at 11:44 AM

    When I read this, I imagine sunlight caught in raindrops slowly rolling down and spreading out in pools over everything. Lovely!

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    1. bluberriesonmarsNovember 5, 2012 at 11:52 AM

      Your interpretation is lovely! Thx for the kind words....

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